After i got more feedback from my teacher, i made some more improvements to my double page spread. Firstly i moved 'the gogos go for it' from the left hand page, up to the top of the right hand page as i thought the pull quote on the left was enough to attract the audiences attention. Moving this made the right hand page look more like it had an important title to it and looked a lot more eye catching to the article. Also instead of having a small paragraph briefly explaining the interview, i changed it into having a big paragraph over the length of the top of the page before the article starts. In the paragraph i also added more detail about the band, giving more of a clear understanding about who the article is about before it's being read. By doing this, meant i had to make the font smaller Another thing i changed was the colour of the questions being asked in the article. I changed the colour from black to a dark red which has been used throughout the other pages of the magazine. This also makes the questions stand out more and the parts of important information in the last ending paragraph to conclude the full article. I think the changed i have made have made big improvements and is close to being my final version.
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